Covert Pea can you just change this one thing on my logo?

please can you change the sky blue border round the edge to white please, i would have used the previous thread to post this however it was closed, also you won't accept pm's

to look like this but high quality as this is a poor edit i did in paint

ah cheers mate lol dont mean to sound fussy but if you have time can you just quickly make one and post it in the same rar/zip file

i was just messing around with it on paint (i'm a perfectionist lol) and thought this looks good aswell, i'm not sure which i prefer so if you could do both i can decide from that, lol i promise after that you don't have to bother yourself with me again lol

The Font is Narkisim in Bold

Do you think that the pirate face and 'PIRATES' text is centered enough on the shield or do you think that they should be moved up a little to be centered better because at the moment the face is centered but the text is not, what do you think? adjust to center both face and text or does it look good as it is, lol i think it looks decent as it is underneath, i'm just wanting a second opinion lol



Thanks a great deal.

well first of all on the re edited original and for all in fact the outine of the sky blue and black stripes needs to be edited because there is lines of white where it should be sky blue and black, as in the black outline is too thin or the colour not thick enough. also there is a little speck of white like a cm to the left of the shield in line with the bottom of his beard that needs getting rid of lol.

here it shows the outlines with no white lines in between etc, compare this with the actual one and you will see, round the inner border lines



when the little white bit outside of the shield is deleted and the outline is sorted then that original shield without the font is complete and fine.

lol im suprised you didnt have the narkisim font, its already on my computer without any downloads or anything, do you have the jasmineUPC font because i prefer that because im not really a fan of arial black to be honest lol.

if you have jasmineUPC then that in bold is fine

In Fact Jus normal arial font (not arial black) in bold and italics going straight across no arc etc. looks fine, font size 20 i think looks best, try 19 aswell and see wat you think?

do what you can with the font i.e. outlines etc to make it look as professional as possible as i feel that what wrecks logos sometimes is how poor the text looks.

in the final file that you send me could you send me in png format, high resolution and large size:

1 )- the final edit of the original

2) - the final edit of the one 'PIRATES' Text

3 - and one that is the same as number 2) but with the sticking out bits similar to this rough example:



what do you think of the centering on this logo, does it need re doing like the other one with the 'PIRATES' text did, as this is an example based of the centering of the original, do what you think looks best and most professional

i'm not trying to make a mockery of ur generosity but as we haven't ordered the kit and therfore haven't officially chosen our colour, if you have time and if its not too much effort could you also send all 3 designs in Red (Red replace the sky blue on the logos) aswell as the sky blue ones as i think this also looks good and i will then consult my dad (its mine and his team) to see which design and which colour he prefers before ordering the kits, wudn't mind your opinion to take into consideration also.

notice how on the red designs the outline around the pirate is the same colour (white like the stripe outlines) and connects to the outline of the red stripe (can you change for the sky blue designs aswell please, white face outline to connect to stripe outline instead of the current sky blue outline), lol sorry about the really poor quality drawing, all the outline edges are not filled in properly as you can tell by the thin white lines along the sides:



the colour is: hue = 0, sat = 240, lum = 110

Sorry if im being a lot of work, dont mean to be such of a pushy asshole and perfectionist with my designs, thanx for co-operating.

Matt

P.S. Seeing as there is a total of 3 designs in 2 different colour ways that i need, total of 6 logos basically, take as long as you like as a rushed design process will lead to a lesser high quality logo, and also i understand if you need to put it a side for a couple of days to accomodate for your other ongoing projects.

Cheers Mate Your a Legend

lol once again some indecision from me

changed the red colour very slightly

hue = 239, sat = 240, lum = 110

right i'm off to bed lol its 4 am in England lol